Revised Offer Email

revised-offer-email-v2

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When to use
Sending an updated offer after negotiation.
Email Body
Subject:
Updated offer — [Role] at [Company]

Hi [First Name],

Great news — based on our conversation, we've revised the offer:

• [Updated component 1]
• [Updated component 2]
• [Anything unchanged]

Updated letter attached. Let me know if you have any final questions.

Really hoping you say yes.

Best,
[Your Name]