Highlight what changed. Save them re-reading the whole doc.
When to use
Sending an updated offer after negotiation.
Email Body
From:
you@company.com
to:
partner@agency.com
Subject:
Updated offer — [Role] at [Company]
Hi [First Name],
Great news — based on our conversation, we've revised the offer:
• [Updated component 1]
• [Updated component 2]
• [Anything unchanged]
Updated letter attached. Let me know if you have any final questions.
Really hoping you say yes.
Best,
[Your Name]
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