When to Use

Sending an updated offer after negotiation.

Subject Line

Updated offer — [Role] at [Company]

Email Body

Hi [First Name],

Great news — based on our conversation, we've revised the offer:

• [Updated component 1]

• [Updated component 2]

• [Anything unchanged]

Updated letter attached. Let me know if you have any final questions.

Really hoping you say yes.

Best,

[Your Name]

Tone / Notes

Highlight what changed. Save them re-reading the whole doc.